LO: to compare two types of
diary writing
Task: Compare Princess
Victoria’s journal extracts with Princess Iyomon’s blogs
What style is each one written
in?
What sort of language is
used?
What is the same about both
logs?
What is different about
them?
What do you like about each
one?
What do you find
challenging about each one?
Which do you prefer and
why?
L.O. To compare two types
of diary writing.
·
Princess
Victoria’s journal is formal (as if she was writing a letter) whereas princess
Iyommons blog is informal and chatty (as if she was writing to a friend).
·
Princess
Victoria was writing her life in chronological order on the other hand Princess
Iyommon was writing the major events as it went by.
·
Both Princess
Iyommon and Princess Victoria had their diary/journal written on verbal or
non-verbal information.
·
Both logs are about
very old events and automatically corrected by computer, as they are too
precious to be handled by the public
One
cannot select between two such great works as they are both very high in quality
and quantity. For instance:
·
Victoria’s
diary includes: her visit to Charlton Manor and her subjects, such as: Lady
Caroline, Lady Mary, and Lady Anne. And her experiences when she was on her way
to her coronation and her emotions as she slowly ambled to the robbing room
also her feelings as she saw all the people who turned out to see her.
·
Iyomon’s blogs
described all the big events that took place such as: when she visited her
maternal granddad: all her aunties and uncles as they picked her up and their
delighted faces at how heavy she was.
·
Overall I like
Princess Iyommons as it is easy to relate to and is easily understandable; however,
I also like princess Victoria’s explanations about her uncle’s death and the
way she wrote about all the formalities she had to follow during her
coronation.
·
It is of the
hardest decision to select between the two but nevertheless I choose Princess
Victoria because of the structure, language and wise choice of words; it may
not be easy to understand but it is perfect for all types of writing,
consequently giving Victoria a notch up against Iyomon.
Lesson evaluation: I enjoyed this lesson very much;
it needed a lot of imaginitivity J By KK
Teacher feedback: Wow, what can I say to this? Great,
great, great!
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