8th
May 2012
LO:
To write about the most influential person in my life.
The
most Inspirational person in the world is the most famous teacher, Fidelia
Nimmons.
This
teacher helps me with my writing and in science. She is a really kind and
lovable teacher; she makes me understand every word she says so that I don’t
get confused.
Miss
Nimmons also put up a special website called Kingdom of Benin blogs. This helps
me with every subject I do; without Miss Nimmons, I would have been a level two
in English, Science and Spelling; and I do not want to be in secondary school
with a level 2; that would be disgraceful for me.
Now
that I have Miss Nimmons, I can do anything since I’m a level 5; I can do the
things that were Impossible for me before and I’m now that I’m in the top group
as well, I feel really enthusiastic and joyful. That’s why I think Miss Nimmons
is the most influential person in my life.
Teachers comment: Thank
you B, I much appreciate this.
My comment: Thanks. Next
step: I’ll use even more powerful words.
By BBY
By BBY
The
most Influential person in my life
My Nan is the most influential person in my life, she
helps me with my homework. She helped show me around Peckham when I was little.
She is supportive when I’m boxing, telling me to knock people out. She lets my friends
stay over, and she lets me stay over at her house any time I want.
The most Influential thing my Nan had done for me is she
made me go to boxing so I would be a heavyweight champion. At the time I was
getting bulled, and she said that to stop the bullies I should go to boxing and
get tough.
Without my Nan my life would be a misery because the
bullies would have kept on bullying me and I would feel unhappy and scared.
By XX
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