LO: To compare two
types of diary writing.
We are comparing Queen
Victoria’s journal entry of her coronation as Queen with Princess Iyomon web
logs. Queen Victoria’s log had to be rewritten by her youngest daughter
Princess Beatrice; whilst Mrs Nimmons (our teacher) writes Princess Iyomon’s
web logs (blog).
The first way they are
different is that Queen Victoria wrote in formal style whilst Princes Iyomon’s
blogs are in informal style.
The second way is their
use of language. Princess Iyomon’s blogs uses chatty and personal language such
as “ What a day I’ve had!”. On the other hand, Queen Victoria used official and
impersonal language like “rendered the spectacle most imposing”. That is one of
the reasons why I like Princess Iyomon’s more than Queen Victoria’s.
Queen Victoria used
information about her fans and how she felt about everything; she also wrote
about her loyal subjects and described how they dressed. Princess iyomion used
language which tells us that she was not yet very popular because she is young
and not that many people know her.
One of the differences
is that both of them did not write the logs. Our teacher wrote for Princess
Iyomon and Princess Beatrice rewrote Queen Victoria’s, no doubt adding some
more details than the original. We can tell this from Queen Victoria’s journal
initially starts with the time included e.g. “At 10, I got into the stage coach;”
“Reached the Abbey a little after past 11”. As other events do not have time
alongside them, it is safe to say that most of this journal log was written by
Princess Beatrice.
I liked how Princess
Iyomon’s uses chatty and informal style. The language used is very good too and
I could relate to them. I did not like Queen Victoria’s because of the
unfamiliar words and the organisation, there were no paragraphs used and little
punctuation, these made it hard for me to read and understand.
I think I prefer
Princess Iyomon’s because of how it is written out.
Today I
learnt how to compare two different types of diaries in terms of their style
and the language used and how these affects the reader's understanding of them.
It was a fun lesson.
By XX
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